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Peer Review 3

Peer Review 3

Q Peer-Review#3: Draft of Broader Community Study Research Paper For this peer-review session, paste (or upload a doc. or docx. document as an attachment) in the comment box by Sunday of Week Eleven, then comment on your classmates' drafts between Monday and Thursday of Week Twelve, revise and finalize document and submit to the Assignment dropbox by Sunday at the end of Week Twelve. Between Monday-Thursday of week Twelve review at least two of your classmates' documents using the peer review guidelines. First come first serve. Only review those documents that are missing reviews. (need at least two). Make sure to address the person whose work you are reviewing and introduce yourself that you will be reviewing their work. Make the suggested revisions based on Lecture 10 Module 10 and upload a final revised draft next Sunday at the end of Week Twelve, in the Final Broader Community Study Research Report in the Assignment drop box, located under Module 12: Week 12. This assignment is worth 200 points and is the major scaffolding for the rest of your research. Provide feedback based on this information. Provide a detailed response for each question. 1. What does the writer do especially well in writing the draft? 2. Does the writer incorporate both the Primary Research and Secondary Research into the paper? 3. Does the writer bridge and make connections from Module 3: Local Fieldwork data collection to Module 4: Broader Community Study continue research? If so, what did the writer do well? If not, what suggestions will help the writer make stronger connections? 4. Does the writer make a strong argument for the issue/topic? Does the evidence provided support the discussion? 5. Does the writer provide a research paper format, along with main structure of what an APA research paper should contain? (Check the Purdue OWL APA for this. Also, this information is available in Module 10: Week 10). 6. Does the writer use APA in-text citation correctly and does the writer include a Reference page, Appendixes, Glossary, etc...? Additional Information and links available within previous modules. Word count: As a reminder: Final research paper should be about 10-12 pages, double-spaced, one-inch margins. Include cover letter, abstract, research paper (body) with conclusion, reference page placed in abc order in APA style, Appendixes, and glossary primary research work.

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Community plays a dominant role in analyzing and evaluating roles and efforts of community in overall well-being of the community citizen, the research is mainly intended at identifying and evaluating the changes in norms and institution of marriage. Moreover, with thorough changes and technological advancements in the 21st century world, society and culture has also gone abundant of changes (Jamo, 2019). These changes also cast major impact on traditional concept man-woman relationship through marriage, which has also been fostered by women rights movement, same-sex attraction as well as changing duties and responsibilities in this fast-paced world.